Monday, December 8, 2014

Argumentative Essay Revised

Jack English-Cooper
Rhetoric 110 Written Communication
Argumentative Essay 1937 words
December 7, 2014
                                   
                                    Graphic Novels: For Children Or For College Students?
Whether reading graphic novels in a college composition class is a waste of time or a useful form of learning is being wildly discussed around academic administrations. Most academics are under the impression that comic books are for children and therefore a waste of time for college students to read. I disagree. As a college student who has recently analyzed the graphic novel Batman: The Dark Night Returns by Frank Miller, and has read several articles on this debate, I know that graphic novels are incredibly beneficial for student’s development in the classroom. By analyzing graphic novels, students become engaged in the interesting story, which exposes them to communication through images, allowing them to better comprehend rhetorical devices such as ethos, logos, and pathos and ways to address social injustice. In order to prove that graphic novels are beneficial, I will give my personal experiences, show specific examples from the graphic novel, Batman, and back up my arguments with evidence from other scholarly articles. Comic-Con International should head my advice because it is essential that colleges utilize this type of learning since it could change the education system completely.
One of the most important aspects of learning in composition classes is being fully engaged with the readings. According to Askin Yildirim, critics think, “many teachers and scholars... argue that graphic novels can only be regarded as a free time activity that must be kept out of the classroom” (6). These critics are under the false impression that students can’t have fun while they read. But in actuality, when students enjoy the reading they can become more engaged with it. Students like myself struggle to give assigned readings enough attention and focus. Most students feel over worked and skim or barely read the readings. The solution to student’s incompletion of readings is to give the reader more than just words. Graphic novels create a story with pictures and words, in turn grabbing the student’s attention by making it more fantastic and interesting. Clearly this is more productive for learning. When I was assigned the graphic novel, Batman, I found myself sucked into the reading due to the story being brought to life by the images. Askin Yildirim is an agreement that, “Graphic novels can be a source of motivation and stimulation for learners with reading difficulties and with those who are reluctant to be involved in reading activities” (2). Students’ engagement with the reading is essential and graphic novels use of images provides stimulation fort the students. Exploring how Frank Miller utilizes images reveals how pictures are a source of stimulation.
The way Frank Miller depicts the scene of Batman defeating his enemies proves how motivating and stimulating graphic novels can be. There are first several panels with images of the enemies waiting and preparing for the Batman, in which the Batman’s hand becomes periodically easier to see as the panels are read left to right. The last panel in the line displays a picture of someone flying through the air. (38). When the reader see’s the hand becoming larger they are motivated to keep reading since it is hinted that it will end with the Batman flipping the enemy. The reader is stimulated when instead of just reading that the enemy was flipped, they see the bad guy get tossed in the air just as they imagined it.  Engrossing students in the reading is just as essential for being successful as familiarizing them to new forms of imagery communication in preparation for reality.
The way comic books combine images and words is similar to how the majority of the real world communicates, which is why they are so practical for students in composition classes. Unlike how students are asked to read and analyze novels or textbooks, which only use words, adults usually have to gather their information from the newspaper, television news and websites. Newspapers are displayed much like graphic novels, with images and words to communicate what happened. Television, also similar, is composed of moving pictures and audio that relay the message. Graphic novels expose people to these types of communication since the reader must interpret both the images and text. To understand the panel of the Jokers threat in page 125 of Batman The Dark Knight Returns, the reader must read his dialogue in which he threatens to kill everyone in the room as well as view the image to see how he is referring to a huge crowd and about to commit a mass murder. Analyzing both aspects allows the reader to comprehend how horrific the Jokers action will be if the Batman does not interfere. Teaching students how to analyze graphic communication will enable them to do this for the rest of their lives, which is why it is essential for students to study graphic novels in school.
By learning how to interpret messages from images and being able to be deeply enthralled with the reading students in composition classrooms can better explore rhetorical tools such as pathos. As Yildirim states, “Research indicates that ability to visualize a concept is an important step that leads students to go further in the mastery of comprehension skills” (10), which is why when I was exposed to the picture aspect of communication, I was able to extract more meaning out of the pathos. When Batman plots his revenge on the joker and says, “I’ll count the dead one by one… I’ll add them to the list Joker… The list of all the people I’ve MURDERED… By letting you live” (117), Frank Miller is creating the pathos of making the reader feel empathetic and impressed with how upset and determined Batman is. The visual of the Batman looking furious and determined and the image’s color of red help’s the audience explore the pathos further. This gives readers the impression that he is livid and hates injustice so exponentially that he is willing to become violent in order to stop it. The red depiction of Batman also makes readers sympathetic to how hurt he is that he is driven to a thirst for violence. 
Not only is pathos able to be explored but graphic novels also enable more meaning to be drawn from ethos due to how absorbed the reader is. When the reader is focused on the reading they are able to take notice of how ethos is used to set up the credibility and enable the protagonist to succeed. When the commissioner realizes that Batman is fighting for the greater good she allows him to freely fight and succeed (176). Analyzing the image of how the commissioner looks at Batman as she allows him to do his job, and with the readers full engagement in the novel, the reader is able to understand how this is ethos in use through giving Batman credit.  Even logos can be explored in college classes through graphic novels.
The reader’s exploration of logos through the new form of picture communication will help students in the classroom and life. Through analyzing an image, the reader can see how the protagonist creates logical arguments and visually observe the steps. When Batman explains how guns are the weapons of the enemy, there is an image of him breaking a shotgun with ease (173). This image allows the reader to analyze the logos deeper and find symbolic meaning such as how true spirit overpowers mindless weapons. The way graphic novels teach students to analyze these rhetorical moves will aid students in the real world when they need to find or create pathos, ethos, and logos in picture based communication. Besides rhetoric skills, graphic novels also allow students to examine social injustice and how to deal with it.
Students can explore many different forms of social injustice, ways to deal with it and discover their own opinions due to their higher level of interest in graphic novels. When student’s become more excited by the story they look closer at the pictures and the dialogue in order to reap more meaning from the story. They are able to notice details such as relationships when David Heineman points out, “homosexual relationships are often portrayed as mutually-loving and nursing, in a sharp contrast to heterosexual relationships in magna, which depict relationships as male-centered and, at times, abusive” (1). He is referring to how Magna, a Japanese comic, deals with the injustice of homosexuals being treated unfairly, by making homosexual relationships seem better than heterosexual ones. As the students are more engaged in the reading they can pick up on this and explore how the author deals with social injustice. 
Students also can examine social injustice through analyzing the new form of picture communication. As Yildirim says, “Graphic novels rich in visual media enable students to develop more sophisticated cognitive strategies” (9). When analyzing images, students learn more intellectual skills to understand the idea. When students examine the image of Batman leading the group of mutants on horseback (182), they form new ideas about social injustice along with new ways of thinking. The observer explores the idea Frank Miller is sharing that the common citizen should do their part to deal with social injustice just as Batman and the mutants. The idea is developed through seeing the horses and realizing it is a symbol for being average citizens fighting for justice as opposed to depending on the government who has more advanced methods of transportation. In order to really explore ways to deal with social injustice, the graphic novel grabs the reader’s attention making them relate the story to their world and see the characters as real people. The readers are obviously on the protagonist’s side; therefore, they believe that the Joker, who is a mass murder, should die. Mark White and Robert Arp bring up the good point that, “if we say that Batman should kill the Joker, doesn’t that imply that we should torture terror suspects” (2). This is the idea that comes up after the reader closely examines the text and thinks about it. The reader first thought that the Joker should die, but after looking at the idea in context with how their government deals with criminals, they began to think about how they would deal with social injustice. Graphic novels ability to engage the reader in a personal way allows the reader to discover how they really feel about how to deal with social injustice.
The comic books every kid reads when they are little are productive readings for college students. Through graphic novels exciting pictures and dialogue they draw the reader in allowing them to reap more meaning from the rhetoric tools, examine the character dynamics closer, and compare the ways social injustice is dealt with in the real world so they can develop their own opinions. The exposure of a new form of communicating through images is far more realistic since it is how the real world communicates. This in turn allows readers to find rhetoric tools and deeper meanings from images, learn how to understand the message the picture is revealing, and develop the students ability to analyze picture communication for their adult lives. Graphic novels although childish, are excellent ways to explore communication and should be seen as a strong literary learning device for college students. The Comic-con International should now understand how vital graphic novels are and accept them into composition classes. Allowing the study of graphic novels in college classrooms is just the beginning of a breakthrough in academia. There are many more useful forms of educating college students that must be sought out in order to really progress education.

















            Works Cited:

Yildirim, Askin. "Using Graphic Novels in the Classroom." Dil Ve Edebiyat Egitimi Dergisi. 2013, Vol. 2 Issue 8, P118-131, 14p, 1 Dec. 2013. Web. 10 Nov. 2014.

Heinman, David. "Graphic Novels." SAGE Knowledge (2012): 151-52. SAGE Knowledge. Web. 11 Nov. 2014. <http://knowledge.sagepub.com/view/genderinmedia/n64.xml>.

White, Mark D., and Robert Arp. "Should Batman Kill The Joker." New York Times. New York Times, 25 July 2008. Web. 11 Nov. 2014.















Jack English-Cooper
Rhetoric 110 Written Communication
Argumentative Essay: Dear Reader 248 words
November 14, 2014
                                   
            Dear Reader
1) My goal was to slow down when reading. I have done this. Reading Batman forced me to slow down in order to interpret the images. I have worked to do this more with the researching part by analyzing details more closely.
2) My goal was to outline earlier. I worked toward this by trying to figure out the outline before jumping in. I did not reach this goal as much as I wanted. Instead I started writing and when I was not sure I outlined what I would wright about in the essay.
3) My goal for writing was to do more free writing. I have done so with this essay through writing from my mind more before editing. This heeled me get my ideas down.
4) I wanted to get better at making sure my argument fits the prompt. I did this better here as I always focused my argument on the prompt. I wish I could have created more of a central argument, and I will work more towards that.
5) For my final I want to revise this essay. I think I can push this essay to the next level and it will help my learning process. Since this essay is a bout new form of communication, looking deeper into it will teach me more life goals.
6) Developed Well-developed developed developed in progress well developed developed developed

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